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美英澳三国出国留学人数

Students from US, UK and Australia Studying Abroad

The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图展示了2002年至2007年间美国、英国和澳大利亚赴其他国家留学的学生人数。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:美英澳三国出国留学人数

为什么这是折线图 ,要求你描述随时间变化的主要趋势和变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述(整个时期的主要趋势)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

概述

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估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response is well organised and covers the key trends and most data points from the graph accurately, with a clear overview of the contrasting UK decline and the recovery of the other two countries. Its main limitations are describing Australia's flat figures after 2005 as a steady increase and calling the UK decline continual in the overview, despite correctly reporting its initial plateau in the detail.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers the main trends with a clear overview and largely accurate figures matching the graph. However, it incorrectly describes the US and Australia as maintaining a steady increase after 2005, when Australia stayed flat, and calls the UK decline continual in the overview despite acknowledging its initial plateau in the detail.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Information is logically sequenced from overview to year-by-year detail with effective linking devices such as 'Similarly', 'In contrast', and 'on the other hand', and progression is consistently clear.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and generally appropriate for describing trends, including 'the trend reversed' and 'persisted'. Precision is weaker when 'steady increase' is applied to Australia's stable figures and when students themselves, rather than their number, are described as decreasing or remaining at a numerical level.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including complex sentences with participle and relative clauses, and errors are rare and do not impede meaning.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Verify every trend description against the graph before writing, especially distinguishing between figures that rise steadily and those that remain stable, and account for the UK's flat first year in the overview.

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