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家用烟熏炉的结构与工作原理

Structure and Operation of a Home Smokery

The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图描述了一台家用烟熏炉的结构及其工作方式。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点：家用烟熏炉的结构与工作原理

为什么这是流程图 ，要求你从头到尾说明一个过程的先后顺序。

所以我们把要点分为概述（共有几个阶段，从哪里开始、到哪里结束）和阶段（按顺序列出每一步）。

概述

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估算分数7.5/ 9

总体评价

The response is fluent, clearly organised and supported by a good range of vocabulary and complex structures. It identifies smoke production and the final smoking chamber, but the overview starts with the logs and misses the initial fresh-air section. The lids are also omitted, while cooling is asserted without visual evidence. A more diagram-led account would replace speculative explanation with the visible air route, pipe position and hanging fish.

TA

任务完成情况

The response provides an overview and describes smoke production and the smoking box, but it omits the first numbered fresh-air section and the two lids. The duct represents the pipe, although its route could be clearer; cooling and heat-resistant construction are not established by the image.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

The paragraphs and references create a clear, logical progression from introduction to overview and details. However, the extended explanation of cooling distracts from the physical route, and the missing air-intake stage leaves that sequence incomplete.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and generally natural, including “ignited”, “channelled” and “suspended”. Some wording is less precise for this visual task: “raw smoke” makes the introduction abstract, and the broad food description misses the clearly visible fish.

8.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including complex participle and relative clauses, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Trace the full route from the fresh-air inlet to the logs and then through the sloping pipe into the box. Include the two lids and hanging fish, and replace the unsupported cooling explanation with visible structural details.

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