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五种不同果酱的销量

Sales of Five Different Kinds of Jam

The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

图表显示了2009年至2014年五种不同果酱的销量。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点：五种不同果酱的销量

为什么这是折线图 ，要求你描述随时间变化的主要趋势和变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述（整个时期的主要趋势）和要点（值得描述的数据和对比）。

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估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response covers all five jam types with a clear overview and a logical structure. Most reported values are consistent with the chart, but the description of cherry misses its rise in 2012 and plateau in 2013. The chart also gives no basis for the repeated measurement label 'million units'. Language is generally effective, with occasional awkward phrasing and a subject–verb agreement error.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers all five categories and provides a clear overview, but cherry's later trend is inaccurate: it rises to just over 3 in 2012, stays level in 2013 and finishes just below 3. The repeated use of 'million units' is also unsupported because the chart provides no measurement unit.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically from overview to individual trends, with cohesive devices such as 'Similarly', 'However' and 'Moving on' used naturally, though the final Cherry description is slightly confusing.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and generally suitable for describing trends, including 'reached a peak' and 'gradually dropped'. Some expressions lack precision or clarity: 'the figures ... witnessed ... their sales' is cumbersome, and 'no unit was recorded' can suggest missing data rather than zero sales.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used accurately, including participial openings ('Starting at 3.2 million units'), relative clauses and passive voice, with only minor errors such as subject-verb disagreement in '2.5 million units of plum was sold'.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Check both the measurement labels and each annual movement before writing. Do not assume a unit that the chart does not provide; for cherry, distinguish the rise in 2012, the plateau in 2013 and the final decline.

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