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Present and Future College Site Plans
The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
下方示意图展示了一所学院现有的建筑，以及该学院校区未来的改建计划。
请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息，并在相关之处进行比较。
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为什么这是地图 ，要求你描述一个地方发生了哪些变化。
所以我们把要点分为概述（这个地方的整体变化）和主要变化（新增、拆除、移动或保留了什么）。
Overall, the main changes to the college will include the expansion and renovation of the college building, with the addition and removal of several rooms and facilities.
As can be observed, the future design would remove footpaths and the garden, instead opting for a larger car park and main building.
In addition, there would be more classrooms and an extra shop.
The footpath and garden surrounding the building will be removed, and the existing carpark expanded to accommodate more cars.
The footpath and garden surrounding the building will be removed, and the existing carpark expanded to accommodate more cars.
The footpath and garden surrounding the building will be removed, and the existing carpark expanded to accommodate more cars.
The future plans propose that the new entrance will be on the southern side of the building, adjacent to the main road and bus stop.
The future plans propose that the reception will be moved to the centre of the building towards the new entrance at the south, and the library relocated to the western side, making way for four new classrooms.
The future plans propose that the reception will be moved to the centre of the building towards the new entrance at the south, and the library relocated to the western side, making way for four new classrooms.
The future plans propose that the reception will be moved to the centre of the building towards the new entrance at the south, and the library relocated to the western side, making way for four new classrooms.
The toilets will be moved to the opposite end of the building, where the old entrance was, and a new shop will be built next to the existing lunch area.
The toilets will be moved to the opposite end of the building, where the old entrance was, and a new shop will be built next to the existing lunch area.
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Overall, the main changes to the college will include the expansion and renovation of the college building, with the addition and removal of several rooms and facilities.
The future plans propose that the new entrance will be on the southern side of the building, adjacent to the main road and bus stop.
The footpath and garden surrounding the building will be removed, and the existing carpark expanded to accommodate more cars.
The toilets will be moved to the opposite end of the building, where the old entrance was, and a new shop will be built next to the existing lunch area.
The reception area would also be moved from the side of the building to the main corridor, while the library would be switched to the opposite side.
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