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1981年至2000年某欧洲国家的燃料产量

Fuel Production in a European Country 1981–2000

The graph below shows the production levels of main fuels in a European country from 1981 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了1981年至2000年某欧洲国家主要燃料的产量水平。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:1981年至2000年某欧洲国家的燃料产量

为什么这是折线图 ,要求你描述随时间变化的主要趋势和变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述(整个时期的主要趋势)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

概述

2个要点

要点

6个要点

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估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response covers all three fuels across the full period with a clear overview, well-chosen comparisons, and a wide range of trend vocabulary and structures. Its main limitation is a series of data inaccuracies, including dates and figures that do not match the graph, such as starting in 1980 and misreporting petroleum's plateau and coal's recovery.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers all three fuels, gives a clear overview and makes relevant end-point comparisons. However, it misdates the start as 1980, shortens the petroleum plateau and places coal’s recovery too early. It also repeatedly uses tonnes, although the supplied chart does not identify a measurement unit.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Information is logically sequenced chronologically, with clear paragraphing that divides the period around 1990. Referencing and linking expressions such as “meanwhile”, “This figure” and “after which” generally make the progression easy to follow.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is flexible and precise for describing trends, with phrases like 'plummeted', 'soared', 'on a downward trajectory', and 'virtually unchanged', though occasional awkward phrasing such as 'the data of petroleum' appears.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used with generally good control, including subordinate and participial clauses. Errors are occasional and do not impede understanding, notably the article choice in “a first few years” and the extra space before the full stop after “trajectory”.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Verify every date and value against the graph before writing, since several misread data points undermine otherwise strong reporting.

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