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三个欧洲国家的足球比赛观众人数

Football Match Attendance in Three European Countries

The graph below shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了1980年至2004年三个欧洲国家顶级足球比赛的平均观众人数。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:三个欧洲国家的足球比赛观众人数

为什么这是折线图 ,要求你描述随时间变化的主要趋势和变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述(整个时期的主要趋势)和要点(值得描述的数据和对比)。

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总体评价

The response presents the main trends clearly, with a useful overview, logical paragraphing and generally accurate figures. Vocabulary and complex sentence structures are handled confidently. It exceeds the 150-word minimum. Distinguishing the two crossings of Italy’s line and highlighting the changing order of England and Germany would make the comparisons more precise and informative.

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任务完成情况

The response covers the main trends and starting and ending comparisons clearly, with a clear overview and generally accurate figures. More precise distinctions between the crossings and the two countries’ recovery patterns would strengthen the comparison.

8.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas are sequenced logically with a clear overview and well-managed linking devices such as 'Conversely' and 'From this point', producing a cohesive and fluent account.

8.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural use of terms like 'downward trajectory', 'nadir', and 'robust upward trend', showing strong awareness of style and collocation.

8.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures, including participle phrases and complex sentences, is used with flexibility and accuracy; errors are rare and non-impeding.

8.0

下一步改进重点

Distinguish Germany’s position above Italy in 1998 from England’s later crossing, and compare England and Germany’s changing order during their recovery. No extra length is needed simply to meet the minimum.

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