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现代生活垃圾填埋场的设计

Design of a Modern Landfill for Household Waste

The diagram shows the design of a modern landfill for household waste.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

该图显示了一座现代生活垃圾填埋场的设计。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:现代生活垃圾填埋场的设计

为什么这是流程图 ,要求你从头到尾说明一个过程的先后顺序。

所以我们把要点分为概述(共有几个阶段,从哪里开始、到哪里结束)和阶段(按顺序列出每一步)。

概述

2个要点

阶段

5个要点

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分数详情

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估算分数7.0/ 9

总体评价

The response follows construction, use and closure in a logical order and uses a good range of technical vocabulary and sentence structures. Its overview identifies containment and drainage, but omits closure. Several details go beyond the image, notably the tank’s construction and the claimed conversion of rubbish into mud. Confusing liners with pipes and a plural-agreement error also reduce precision.

TA

任务完成情况

The response describes construction, use and closure, but the overview omits closure and gas release. The tank’s supposed excavation through the layers and the conversion into a mud-like compound are unsupported; the liquid outlet is also misidentified as liners.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically through construction, use and closure in three paragraphs, with sequencing expressions making the progression easy to follow. The reference to the conversion in the final sentence depends on an unsupported earlier claim.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is varied and topic-appropriate, including leachate, refuse and sealed. However, liners is used for drainage pipes, and mud-like compound gives an unsupported description of the waste; household waste would be the more usual collective form.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A wide range of structures is used with good control, including passive constructions and participial clauses, though errors such as 'gases that are emitted... is eventually pumped out' and a missing final full stop show occasional slips.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Proofread subject-verb agreement and refine the accuracy of key descriptive terms, particularly for how waste liquid and gases leave the site.

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实用词汇:现代生活垃圾填埋场的设计

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句型:现代生活垃圾填埋场的设计

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