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煤矿区重新开发前后对比

Coal Mining Site Before and After Redevelopment

The maps below show a coal mining site before and after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下图显示了一处煤矿区重新开发前后的情况。

请选择并报告主要特征来概括信息,并在相关之处进行比较。

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要点:煤矿区重新开发前后对比

为什么这是地图 ,要求你描述一个地方发生了哪些变化。

所以我们把要点分为概述(这个地方的整体变化)和主要变化(新增、拆除、移动或保留了什么)。

概述

1个要点

主要变化

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总体评价

The response presents a clear overview and a logical before-and-after comparison, supported by a good range of location and redevelopment vocabulary. Accuracy is weakened by exaggerating the mine entrance’s extent and describing the office and changing room as diminished rather than replaced. The new facilities need clearer individual locations. The opening sentence of the initial-layout paragraph is also incomplete, despite otherwise varied grammatical structures.

TA

任务完成情况

The response covers the main redevelopment with a clear overview and relevant comparisons. However, the entrance is incorrectly said to occupy most of the upper map, the office and changing room are described as diminished rather than replaced, and the new leisure facilities need more distinct locations.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically through a clear before-and-after structure with cohesive devices and referencing that guide the reader without strain, despite occasional slightly mechanical linking.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

There is a good range of topic-specific and change vocabulary, including “waste tips”, “converted into” and “recreational facilities”. Some choices lack precision: “diminished” suggests reduction rather than replacement, and “medical centre” is less faithful to the map’s “Medical room” label.

7.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

The response uses varied complex structures, including relative clauses, participle constructions and passive forms. Most sentences are clear, but the opening sentence describing the original layout lacks an independent main clause, and there is an unnecessary space before the first full stop.

7.0

下一步改进重点

Check each facility’s position and change of use against the maps, especially the mine entrance and the three new leisure areas. Then ensure that every sentence has a main clause, including the opening description of the original layout.

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