1994至2004年四国香蕉价格

The response covers all four countries with an overview and relevant comparisons. However, it overstates Germany’s fluctuations and similarity to France, and describes a gradual fall through 2004 where the graph shows stability from 2002. Several turning points would be clearer with explicit dates; nearby approximate values are not substantive contradictions.

Progression is logical with clear paragraphing by country and effective linking devices, though occasional referencing such as with it becoming is slightly awkward.

Vocabulary is flexible, with useful trend language such as rebounding and leveling off. However, wild fluctuations overstates Germany’s movements, and almost exactly mirrored exaggerates its similarity to France. More measured trend descriptions would improve precision.

The response uses a range of relative and participial clauses with generally good control. The past perfect in “after which it had risen” does not fit the chronological sequence; simple past is appropriate. The French stability sentence could also express its subject more directly.