Tall Apartment Blocks for Housing in Large Cities

The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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the construction of high-rise apartment blocks is the optimal solution to housing shortages in urban areas. While it is undeniable that vertical development in large cities is highly important, I only partially agree with this statement, as certain factors regarding sustainability and infrastructure need to be better accounted for.

It is true that tall buildings are in areas where land is scarce. in major economic hotspots of the world such as New York or Singapore, where expansion to surrounding regions is impossible due to political and geographical limitations respectively. In these cases, building residential complexes higher instead of wider can maximize the , offering a solution to rapidly increasing populations in such urban areas. Public facilities and services such as transport, water or electricity can also be better optimized with taller apartment buildings. In addition, vertical expansion in metropolitan areas , as surrounding land can be utilized or preserved for other essential purposes such as manufacturing, energy generation, agriculture or .

However, building taller residential buildings may not be . From a human point of view, the reliance on high-rise buildings – and the spike in population density as a result – can magnify , such as social isolation, higher crime rates, and strain on social services including healthcare, education and energy. For instance, many hyper-dense residential districts in modern metropolises suffer from severe traffic congestion and a lack of green spaces, which directly degrades the residents’ quality of life. In fact, cities nowadays are a combination of strategies which may include reusing existing facilities, encouraging the development of medium-density housing, and amending laws regarding rent and house ownership costs to ensure .

, the image of high-rise apartments dominating city skylines comes to mind. While this is for good reason, I personally believe that the only sustainable way to provide housing in these areas is to not rely on any single method, but to coordinate multiple different strategies and improve all facets of life, not just to simply add more houses.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response presents a clear partial-agreement position, develops it with relevant examples such as New York and Singapore, and reaches a reasoned conclusion favouring a combined strategy. Its strongest aspect is the flexible, precise language and effective paragraph organisation, while the main limitation is that some ideas, particularly the discussion of social problems, are asserted rather than fully supported, and the argument leans towards diluting the chosen position.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.0

The position of partial agreement is clear throughout and supported with relevant examples and explanation, though some claims about social problems and combined strategies remain underdeveloped rather than fully extended.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically across well-managed paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, although transitions occasionally feel formulaic and one body paragraph introduces new arguments late in the response.

Lexical Resource

8.0

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'land is scarce', 'vertical expansion', and 'hyper-dense residential districts', and only rare, non-impeding lapses.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of complex structures is used with generally good control and punctuation, with errors occasional and rarely affecting communication.

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