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Pros and Cons of Mandatory Company Uniforms

Question

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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In some corporations, it is mandatory for employees to wear a uniform. The main benefits of wearing a uniform are that it brings and helps to increase the ; however, the increase in the expenditure of organizations and monotony among employees are the main drawbacks of compulsory uniforms. The first main positive of a mandatory uniform is that it creates equality among workers. When employees wear uniforms, they do not know each other’s socio-economic background because they all look the same, and as a result, they treat each other equally. Furthermore, uniforms help companies to enhance their overall sales. This is because uniforms help people to develop good relationships with others, and when people have with others, they usually help each other, and it increases the output of corporations. , the sales of those automobile companies are higher where uniforms are mandatory because, in these corporations, people have good relationships with others. The main disadvantage of the compulsory uniform is that it creates monotony among workers. When employees have to wear the same clothes regularly, they feel bored and sometimes, it has a negative impact on their productivity. Furthermore, the obligation to wear a uniform also increases the expenses of organizations. This is to say that in companies have to allocate some money for . For instance, the spending of the famous footwear company, Bata, is around 5% more than its rival companies because in this company a uniform is mandatory, and the company allocates some money for uniforms. In conclusion, the main advantages of the compulsory uniform are that it brings and increases companies’ overall sales, and the main disadvantages are boredom among workers and an increase in the expenditure of corporations.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response addresses both sides of the question with relevant main ideas and a logical structure supported by examples. Its main limitation is that some explanations move too quickly from uniforms to equality or higher sales. The numerical cost comparison also lacks a clear basis within the example, while occasional imprecise wording weakens otherwise clear expression.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

TR Task Response

7.0

The response addresses both advantages and disadvantages with a clear overview and extended main ideas, though some support, such as the India and Bata examples, is asserted rather than fully developed or substantiated.

CC Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas are organised logically across clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices, although linking within some arguments is slightly mechanical and repetitive.

LR Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible for the topic, including expenditure, monotony and allocate. Precision is less consistent in “a good bonding” and in the movement between output and sales.

GRA Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A variety of complex structures is used with generally good control, and errors such as the capitalised In and occasional awkward phrasing are minor and do not impede meaning.