International Sports Events: Unity or Competition

In the contemporary world, Suggested change: some people believe thatsome people believe that1it is widely believed by some people that sports events like the Olympics or the World Cup are the best ways to unite nations, while others argue that these Suggested change: foster competitionfoster competition2develop competition Suggested change: rather than buildrather than build3rather than building relationships between countries. From my perspective, these occasions may bring people from Suggested change: participating countriesparticipating countries4those regions together and assist them in improving their relations economically.

Suggested change: Considering the benefitsConsidering the benefits5Analyzing the statement and explaining further, whenever Suggested change: these events are heldthese events are held6these events are conducted, each country will get an opportunity to host them. In this way, when the respective team members and their fans travel to that country to support them, they will eventually explore that place and build relationships with the citizens of that country. Moreover, many members will get a chance to know the cultures of that region that will Suggested change: help them grow closerhelp them grow closer7facilitate them to get closer to each other. Similarly, when the citizens Suggested change: focus on buildingfocus on building8pay attention to build their relationships, the administrations of those nations will also look to build the bond between them in terms of trade, technology and economic support. Although they might be enemies, they will try to work on things that will have Suggested change: a favourable impact ona favourable impact on9a favourable outcome on their economies. Therefore, their Suggested change: bond gradually strengthensbond gradually strengthens10bond gradually increases, which will benefit both the citizens and the countries.

Suggested change: Turning to the opposing viewTurning to the opposing view11Probing ahead, such competition is also a crucial factor to consider when Suggested change: competing in those eventscompeting in those events12performing in those events. This is because everyone wants to perform well and lift the cup, which will put them in a difficult situation, as their main motive sometimes will be just to win the match. Additionally, there may also be a lot of rivalries between them, which, Suggested change: eventuallyeventually13at a certain point, will not assist them in having good relations. Nevertheless, some countries Suggested change: set these rivalries asideset these rivalries aside14keep these things aside and save their relationship by Suggested change: keeping sporting results separate from their international relationskeeping sporting results separate from their international relations15not including the event’s results in their bucket list. In terms of fans, they might not be interested in Suggested change: prioritising friendshipsprioritising friendships16choosing relationships when it comes to winning the World Cup for their respective nations. Hence, it creates a lot of competition, and they will Suggested change: work hard rather than strengthenwork hard rather than strengthen17work hard rather than strengthening their bonds.

Suggested change: In conclusionIn conclusion18To recapitulate, from the information aforementioned, we can clearly state that occasions such as the Olympics and the football World Cup will not only bring people closer but also help the regions to enhance their overall economic activities and Suggested change: strengthen their economiesstrengthen their economies19make their economy stronger. Ultimately, Suggested change: everyone involved in these events is a winnereveryone involved in these events is a winner20everyone involved in these are winners, because it will be advantageous for them throughout the league.