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Free Public Libraries vs Internet Access

Question

Some people think that the government should provide free public libraries in every town, while others think that this is a waste of money because people can access information on the internet. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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Some people argue that governments should build free public libraries in every town, while others claim that this is unnecessary since the internet already provides easy access to information. Although online sources are undeniably convenient, I believe that libraries still serve an essential social and educational role that the internet cannot fully replace.

On one hand, the internet allows people to access a vast amount of information at little or no cost. For example, students can now locate millions of research papers, lectures, and e-books from websites like Google Scholar or Coursera without leaving their homes. This has made learning more flexible and inclusive, especially for people living in remote areas. Furthermore, maintaining physical libraries can be expensive, requiring staff salaries, electricity, and , whereas digital resources are comparatively cheap to update and distribute. From this perspective, building libraries may appear outdated and financially inefficient.

On the other hand, public libraries provide benefits beyond mere access to information. They offer quiet, structured environments that promote deep reading and concentration, something that online browsing often discourages. For instance, in Finland, libraries act as community centers where children attend storytelling sessions, the elderly join reading clubs, and unemployed residents receive job-search training. These social interactions strengthen community bonds and create equal learning opportunities regardless of income level. As not everyone has reliable internet access, especially in developing countries, libraries remain an essential bridge to intellectual and social progress.

In conclusion, while the internet has revolutionized how people obtain information, libraries continue to play a vital educational and social role. Governments should not view them as a financial burden but as long-term investments in literacy, equality, and community well-being.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The response presents both viewpoints in a clear, balanced structure and maintains a consistent opinion supporting libraries. Relevant examples explain their educational and social value, while language and complex grammar are generally well controlled. The main opportunities are to justify free provision in every town more explicitly and explain compressed links between social activities, affordability and equal opportunity.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

TR Task Response

8.0

Both viewpoints are addressed with relevant explanations and examples, and support for libraries is clear throughout. The response could more explicitly justify free provision in every town and explain a few causal links, including how access promotes equality.

CC Coherence and Cohesion

7.5

The argument progresses logically through clearly organised paragraphs, with effective contrast between internet access and libraries’ wider benefits. Some links remain compressed, particularly the move from social interaction to equal learning opportunities.

LR Lexical Resource

7.5

Vocabulary is varied and generally precise, with appropriate expressions such as “community bonds” and “financially inefficient”. Minor imprecision appears in “constant book replacement” and the broad metaphor “bridge to intellectual and social progress”.

GRA Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

A wide range of complex structures is used with strong control, including concessive clauses, relative clauses and comparisons. Sentences remain clear and accurate across both arguments and the conclusion.