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Letter Advising a Friend About a University Course

Question

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………………… ,

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Dear Nairit,

I hope this letter finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re considering applying for the same course I took at Oxford University. Pursuing a degree in Computer Science was an incredible experience, and I’d be more than happy to share my thoughts and advice.

The Computer Science program at Oxford University is truly exceptional. It offers a comprehensive curriculum that covers both theoretical and practical aspects of the subject. The professors are highly knowledgeable and passionate about their fields, and they encourage critical thinking and intellectual growth. Additionally, the university provides excellent resources, such as state-of-the-art labs and a well-stocked library, to support your learning journey.

One of the reasons I highly recommend Oxford University is its vibrant and diverse community. You’ll have the opportunity to interact with students from various backgrounds, broadening your perspectives and fostering a rich exchange of ideas. The campus is also beautiful, offering a conducive environment for study and personal growth.

As for the application process, my advice would be to start early and pay close attention to the deadlines. Make sure to prepare a strong personal statement that highlights your passion for the subject, relevant experiences, and future goals. Additionally, secure excellent letters of recommendation from professors or mentors who can attest to your academic potential and character.

I wish you the very best in your endeavors, and I’m confident that Oxford University could provide you with an exceptional educational experience. Please don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any further questions or need additional guidance.

Warmest regards,

Sunanda Balki

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The letter addresses all three bullet points in a clear sequence and uses fluent, accurate language to recommend the university and offer application advice. The main opportunity is to replace generic descriptions with specific course content and personal experience. A more conversational closing would also make the advice feel more natural between friends.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

TA Task Achievement

8.0

The letter addresses all three bullet points with a clear purpose and relevant reasons and advice. More specific course content would strengthen the first bullet, while parts of the closing sound more formal than the friendship requires.

CC Coherence and Cohesion

8.0

Ideas are logically sequenced across well-formed paragraphs, with cohesive devices used naturally and no strain on the reader.

LR Lexical Resource

8.0

Vocabulary is varied and generally accurate, with natural combinations such as comprehensive curriculum and highly knowledgeable. Some formulaic praise and abstract wording make parts of the letter sound less personal than direct advice to a friend.

GRA Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

A wide range of grammatical structures, including relative clauses and conditionals, is used with strong accuracy and flexibility across the response.