Invite a Famous Actor to Open a New Theatre

You work for an entertainment company which plans to open a new theatre soon. You want to invite a famous actor to open the new theatre. Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter - give some information about the new theatre - invite her/him to open the new theatre - explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre Dear ______________ ,

Annotated response

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Dear sir,

My name is Rahul Patel, manager of H. k. Entertainment company . I feel to we are going to soon. So, I am writing this letter to invite you .

The new theatre is going to open on January 2026 such as , , reclining chairs .

To add further, if you could come and is my pleasure to invite you . I understand you but it would be appreciated if you . It will start you arrive.

Moreover, you are the most successful actor in our hard work, dedication, determination will to learn new things.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your sincerely

Rahul

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 5.5

The letter achieves its communicative purpose and covers all three bullet points with relevant detail about the theatre, the invitation, and the actor's suitability. The main limitation is frequent grammatical and word-choice errors, such as 'I will be wondering', 'It will be not take long' and 'as soons as', which reduce precision throughout.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Achievement

6.0

The letter addresses all three bullet points with relevant information about the theatre's opening date and facilities, a clear invitation, and reasons for the choice, though the tone is occasionally informal and the purpose is stated somewhat loosely.

Coherence and Cohesion

6.0

Ideas are arranged in a logical paragraph order and the message is generally clear, but cohesion is often mechanical or inaccurate, with linkers such as 'To add further' and 'Moreover' plus a fused sentence reducing flow.

Lexical Resource

5.5

Vocabulary conveys the key messages but remains imprecise and sometimes incorrect, including 'I feel delighte', 'I will be wondering', and 'congratulate this new starts', which limits flexibility and accuracy.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

5.0

Basic sentence forms are used with frequent errors in verb structure and agreement, such as 'It will be not take long time' and 'help to audience to learn', while some attempts at complex sentences lose control.

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