初次见面快速形成印象是好是坏

Making Quick First Impressions: Good or Bad Thing?

When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

当我们第一次见到某人时,通常会很快判断我们认为他们是什么样的人,以及我们是否喜欢他们。这是好事还是坏事?

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写作思路:初次见面快速形成印象是好是坏

为什么这是积极或消极类 ,要求你说明某个趋势出现的原因,并判断它是好是坏。

所以我们把思路分为积极(为什么是好事)和消极(为什么是坏事)。

积极

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消极

3条思路

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The response directly answers the question with a clear, consistent position and three well-developed supporting ideas. Its strongest aspect is the controlled, precise language, while the main limitation is the somewhat formulaic development, where each point is supported briefly rather than extended with depth or varied examples.

TR

任务回应

The response fully addresses the task with a clear position, relevant main ideas, and appropriate supporting examples, though development is somewhat general rather than extended.

7.5
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas progress logically across well-structured paragraphs with effective linking devices, although transitions such as furthermore and additionally are somewhat predictable.

7.5
LR

词汇丰富度

Vocabulary is wide and precise, with natural collocations like snap judgments and preconceived notions, and only minimal lapses in precision.

7.5
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A variety of complex structures is used with good flexibility and control, and errors are rare and non-impeding.

7.5

下一步改进重点

Deepen the development of each main idea by extending one or two examples with more concrete detail or analysis rather than introducing three similar points.

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