政府应否遏制自然资源过度使用

Government Action Against Overusing Natural Resources

The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?

过度使用自然资源会导致其最终耗尽。人们使用这些资源是为了赶上新潮流,例如制作最新设计的新家具。这对环境造成了巨大危害。因此,政府应当劝阻人们过度使用这些资源。你在多大程度上支持或反对这一观点?

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总体评价

The response presents a clear, consistent position with well-organized paragraphs and relevant supporting examples such as deforestation and fossil fuel consumption. Its strongest aspect is the logical structure and developed ideas; the main limitation is recurring grammatical inaccuracy and some awkward or imprecise word choices that occasionally reduce clarity.

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任务回应

The response addresses the task directly with a clear, consistently maintained position, well-developed main ideas, and relevant supporting examples such as logging, fossil fuels, taxation, and alternative energy.

7.0
CC

连贯与衔接

Ideas are logically organized across clear paragraphs with a logical progression, though some cohesive devices such as 'And then' and 'Besides that' are used mechanically.

7.0
LR

词汇丰富度

The response shows an adequate range of vocabulary for the topic, but imprecise or awkward expressions such as “fumes of this energy”, “oil mining plants” and “recover the environment” reduce precision.

6.0
GRA

语法多样性与准确性

A mix of simple and complex sentence forms is used with some variety, but frequent errors in articles, verb forms, and adjective use, such as 'given negative impact the environment' and 'serious damaged', occasionally impede precision.

6.0

下一步改进重点

Review grammar and collocation, particularly articles, verb forms and word classes. For example, use the noun “damage” after “caused serious” and the adjective “excessive” to describe resource use.

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