2015年与2016年各类别出口额

The response gives a relevant overview, covers all five categories and reports the percentage changes accurately or with reasonable rounding. The approximate combined totals are defensible; the clearer limitation is repeated confusion between export earnings and product prices, which the visuals do not measure.

The information is organised logically with clear paragraphing, a linking of chart and table data, and effective cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'In detail', and 'Moreover', producing a generally smooth progression.

Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with items like 'export earnings', 'soared', and 'secured the lowest', though some phrasing such as 'export amount increased... than the previous year' and 'agro merchandise' is awkward or imprecise.

A good range of structures is used with mostly accurate control, including complex comparisons with “while”. Errors in “increased in 2016 than” and the possessive “dollar’s” constructions require correction, but the intended comparisons remain understandable.

The response covers all five categories and identifies the leading earners and the only decline. Its approximate values are supported by the chart, including textiles above $30 billion in 2016. The overview could include textiles’ largest percentage rise, and engineering earnings could be compared more fully.

Ideas progress logically from overview to grouped detail, with cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'Moreover' and 'In contrast' used naturally, with only minor mechanical linking.

Vocabulary is flexible and topic-appropriate, with phrases such as 'witnessed an upward trend', 'export earnings' and 'fairly steady', despite a small slip in 'gems and jewel industry'.

Complex sentences using contrast and comparison are generally well controlled. The response communicates the changes clearly, with accurate clause structures such as “while the figure for agricultural products was fairly steady”.

The response covers all five categories and gives an overview of the main trends. However, it calls the bar chart a line chart, assigns petroleum the agricultural percentage of 0.81% instead of 3%, and describes a rise to nearly 33 billion for agriculture that does not fit the table’s very small 0.81% increase.

Information is organised logically with effective referencing and cohesive devices, and the progression from overview to category details is smooth and easy to follow.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural phrases such as 'witnessing the most significant rise' and 'an opposite trend', showing good awareness of style with only minor imprecision like 'turnovers'.

A wide range of complex structures, including participial phrases and contrastive constructions, is used with generally strong accuracy and only occasional slips such as inconsistent decimal punctuation.

The response covers all five categories with a clear overview of the general rise and the gems and jewellery decline. It compares the leading earners and correctly identifies the approximate convergence of textiles and agriculture, although it omits their 15.24% and 0.81% growth rates.

Ideas progress logically through an overview and then a clear grouping of major and minor exports, supported by effective cohesive devices such as 'That translates to' and 'Compared to these two exports'.

Vocabulary is flexible and precise for describing data trends, including 'sizeable increase', 'moderate drop', and 'the only export to decrease', with only a small slip like 'percentile jumps'.

A wide range of structures is used with strong control, including relative clauses such as “which went from just over $61 billion” and a concessive phrase, “Despite this drop”. Tenses and sentence structures generally communicate the comparisons clearly.

The response selects all key features, gives a clear overview, and reports chart values and table percentages accurately with no invented data or omissions.

Paragraphing is logical with an introduction, overview, and sequenced body sections, and cohesive devices are used skilfully and unobtrusively.

Vocabulary is precise and varied for reporting data, including natural collocations such as export revenues, highest earning exports, and the only decline.

A wide range of structures, including relative clauses and accurate tense and number control, is used with full flexibility and accuracy.