Are People Today More Dependent or Independent?

Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that modern life has woven individuals into tighter webs of interdependence, while others contend that recent technological advances have granted unprecedented personal autonomy. I believe that although global networks connect us more closely than ever, the same tools also empower individuals to act independently and control their own destinies.

It is undeniable that today’s interconnected systems create deep mutual reliance among people, businesses, and nations. global supply-chain reliance makes consumers and countries For instance, a single smartphone can contain components sourced from over forty different countries, from semiconductors in Taiwan to batteries in South Korea. Such complex sourcing arrangements force manufacturers and end-users alike to count on distant partners for essential parts and services. daily use of digital platforms means that individual productivity hinges on shared online infrastructure. When cloud servers or collaboration apps experience outages, entire workflows can grind to a halt, disrupting businesses and personal projects. As a result, reliance on common digital tools renders truly solo productivity increasingly rare.

In contrast, the same innovations that link us globally provide individuals with greater freedom to shape their own lives enables professionals to choose their own schedules and locations. Laptops, secure VPN connections, and collaborative software allow employees to perform tasks from home, coffee shops, or co-working spaces. Consequently, flexible work arrangements give individuals direct control over their work–life balance and career paths. Another reason is that self-service knowledge access reduces dependency on traditional experts and institutions. By way of illustration, do-it-yourself tutorials on platforms like YouTube teach users everything from home repairs to language learning. Instant access to step-by-step guides and community forums means people no longer need to rely on specialists for many everyday skills.

In conclusion, while the intricate global networks and shared digital systems of modern society undeniably foster greater interdependence, I maintain that the same technologies confer remarkable levels of individual independence.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response is a well-organised, balanced discussion that addresses both views with concrete examples and a clear, consistent personal position. Its strongest aspect is the precise, flexible vocabulary and cohesive progression; the main limitation is that supporting ideas remain somewhat formulaic and could be pushed toward deeper, more individualised development.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.5

Both views are fully addressed with relevant, well-supported examples and a clear, consistently maintained opinion throughout, though development occasionally relies on restatement rather than extension.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.5

The response progresses logically with clear paragraphing and a wide range of cohesive devices used naturally, with only occasional slightly mechanical sequencing.

Lexical Resource

8.0

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'mutual reliance', 'grind to a halt', and 'confer remarkable levels of independence', showing rare slips.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of complex structures, including concessive clauses and accurate participial and relative constructions, is used with strong control and only minor lapses.