Imported Food in Supermarkets: Positive or Negative Development

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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The widespread availability of international food in supermarkets has in recent times. While it may seem like a positive development, I believe this trend is . The reliance on imported goods undermines local agriculture and

the influx of globally sourced food items threatens local agriculture. When supermarkets stock products from distant countries, they create unfair competition for local farmers . For instance, local fruit and vegetable growers may find it difficult to sell their produce when foreign alternatives at lower prices. This results in reduced income for domestic farmers and a loss of agricultural diversity. Moreover, the growth of supermarket chains that rely heavily on imports often leads to the decline of smaller, local food markets, which are vital for preserving traditional farming methods.

the environmental impact of transporting food across long distances is significant. The carbon footprint associated with importing food is substantial, as products often , . This widespread distribution of food from different parts of the world contributes to global warming and environmental degradation. For example, fruits and vegetables from countries with warmer climates are frequently flown to colder regions, consuming considerable energy and resources. This reliance on global supply chains increases pollution and .

In conclusion, while the availability of international food might offer convenience, it is a negative development due to its harmful effects on local agriculture and the environment.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response presents a clear position and develops two well-chosen arguments against imported food with relevant supporting detail and examples. Its strongest aspect is the consistent, accurate language and logical paragraph structure, while the main limitation is that the ideas, though well organised, remain somewhat predictable and could be extended with greater depth or nuance.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.0

The response addresses the question directly with a clear, consistent position that the trend is negative, developing two relevant main ideas with explanation and examples throughout.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas progress logically across clear paragraphs with a range of cohesive devices used naturally, though linking remains at times formulaic, as with Firstly and Secondly.

Lexical Resource

7.0

Vocabulary is sufficiently wide and precise for the topic, with natural collocations such as carbon footprint and unfair competition, and only rare imprecision or repetition.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0

A variety of complex structures, including relative clauses and conditionals, is used with good control, and errors are minor and do not impede communication.