In some parts of the world, it is now common for people to they have on the environment, and this includes flying less, with some people even refusing to fly at all. whilst this could be negative in terms of the economy, for the world. First of all, it is important to establish the fact that climate change impacts everyone in various ways and that it will only continue to worsen over the coming decades . The impact on the world will likely include economic distress, so it is important to weigh financial gains today against those of the future. If someone argues that flying more now is important for the sake of the global economy, it overlooks the fact that the effects of climate change in the future could drastically outweigh this. Of course, the impacts go far beyond economic factors. should be given more weight than any other. That said, airplanes are hardly the biggest contributor to climate change. By some estimates, air travel total CO2 emissions, which is a relatively modest figure. If a small number of people from a small number of countries with low populations decide not to travel, the impact would be negligible. On the other hand, these people tend to be quite affluent, so their choice could negatively affect certain travel destinations. Thus, to weigh the realistic outcomes rather than the ideal ones. In any case, their aims are undeniably admirable and there will be some positive effect on the world . In conclusion, when considering the decision to fly less or not fly at all as a means of reducing environmental impact, it is clear that this is a positive step. However, it is probably positive only and many other steps ought to be taken.
Reducing or Stopping Air Travel for the Environment
Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses?
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Overall assessment
Why this response received Band 7.5
The response presents a clear, well-qualified position that environmental benefits outweigh the drawbacks, supported by relevant reasoning such as emission statistics and economic trade-offs. Its strongest aspect is the nuanced argumentation and controlled academic language, while the main limitation is that the discussion of disadvantages for individuals and businesses is developed somewhat unevenly compared with the environmental case.
IELTS criteria
How each score was decided
Task Response
7.5The response directly answers the question with a clear position that benefits outweigh disadvantages, and main ideas are developed with relevant explanation, although the treatment of disadvantages for individuals and businesses is relatively brief.
Coherence and Cohesion
7.5Ideas progress logically across clear paragraphs with effective cohesive devices and referencing, though transitions such as 'That said' and 'In any case' occasionally soften rather than sharpen the line of reasoning.
Lexical Resource
7.5Vocabulary is sufficiently flexible and precise, with natural academic collocations like 'negligible', 'modest figure', and 'weigh financial gains', and only rare, minor imprecision.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7.5A wide range of complex structures is used with good control and punctuation accuracy, with errors being infrequent and non-impeding.