Increasing Fuel Cost to Solve Environmental Problems

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Troubling environmental problems have required nations and individuals to come up with definitive solutions. Among them, increasing the cost of fuel has been touted as decisive, but this proposal has also divided people over its effectiveness. While there are reasons to support it, , in my opinion, is unlikely to be the to humanity’s environmental woes .

Some might argue that making fuel cost more would meaningfully impact the environment. Firstly, raising the cost of fuel is believed to the demand. If their means of become less affordable, people will have to resort to transportation alternatives which produce . The government , furthermore, can levy a tax on purchases of fuel in order to fund cleanup or conservation efforts. As done in many countries, this would ensure that the general population’s demand for energy can fund the caused by fuel emissions. Essentially, making fuel more expensive provides a two-pronged approach to solving environmental issues.

Such a course of action is far from being optimal , however. This is because it can hinder economic activity and stymie development. When fuel becomes more expensive, , and businesses bear the brunt of this impact, which causes them to raise the price of goods and services. Undoubtedly, this is a catalyst for inflation and discontentment among the population. Meanwhile, there exist measures more efficacious than merely making fuel cost more, such as providing public grants and investing in initiatives and companies which produce environmental solutions. The power of technology and talented specialists, combined, can deliver clear-cut and decisive answers to the many issues plaguing the environment, without indiscriminately impacting the economy as previously described.

In conclusion, although increasing the cost of fuel is effective in certain respects, I wholeheartedly dispute the belief that it is for environmental problems. Hopefully, better alternatives can be implemented to preserve the Earth for the sake of future generations.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.0

The response presents a clear, consistent position and develops both sides of the argument with logical progression and some sophisticated vocabulary. The main limitation is occasional awkward or imprecise phrasing, and support for key claims remains somewhat general rather than concretely exemplified.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.0

The response addresses the question directly, maintains a clear position throughout, and develops both the opposing view and the writer's stance with relevant explanation, though examples remain generalized rather than extended.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0

Ideas are logically organized across clear paragraphs with effective linking devices and progression, though some transitions and referential links are occasionally mechanical or slightly strained.

Lexical Resource

7.0

There is a wide range of less common vocabulary used with some flexibility and awareness of style, though occasional imprecise or awkward collocations slightly reduce precision.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5

A variety of complex structures is used with good flexibility and most sentences are error-free, with only occasional slips in phrasing and article use that do not impede communication.