Gap Year Advantages and Disadvantages for Young People

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to from studying after graduating from high school. This trend is not restricted to students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

However, there are certainly in taking time off at . Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated a year off may be the best way to .

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 8.0

The response addresses both sides of the question thoroughly and reaches a clear personal position with well-developed reasoning. Its strongest aspect is the fluent, precise language and logical progression throughout, while the main limitation is that the disadvantages receive comparatively lighter development than the advantages.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

8.0

The response covers both advantages and disadvantages of a gap year and clearly states a position, though the disadvantages are somewhat less developed than the advantages.

Coherence and Cohesion

8.0

Ideas progress logically across cohesive paragraphs with skilful use of cohesive devices such as by contrast, however, and overall.

Lexical Resource

8.0

Vocabulary is wide and precise, with natural academic phrasing such as broader view of life, readapt to an academic environment, and broaden their horizons.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

8.0

A wide range of complex structures is used flexibly and accurately, with rare minor slips such as the comma splice in the final paragraph that do not impede meaning.