Providing Free Water Supply to Every Home

Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that since access to clean water is a fundamental human right, it should be given to every household free of charge. I agree that clean water is essential and should be universally accessible, despite the potential expense of such a proposal.

, providing unlimited free water to every home serious logistical and financial challenges. Water treatment, , and distribution all require funding, skilled labor, and dedicated infrastructure. If water were completely free, there would be little incentive for consumers to use it responsibly, leading to wastage and overconsumption. Consider the example of California during its 2011–2017 drought: despite public campaigns, many affluent neighborhoods continued to overwater their lawns and fill large swimming pools, as water prices were heavily subsidized. This overuse strained reservoirs and forced emergency water restrictions. have implemented a tiered pricing system where basic water needs are affordable, but excessive use is charged at higher rates.

On the other hand, the argument that clean water is a human right is supported by strong moral and humanitarian reasoning. Water is vital , hygiene, and sanitation. Without it, communities are vulnerable to diseases such as cholera, dysentery, and typhoid, all of which are preventable with access to clean water. For example, in sub-Saharan Africa, where millions still lack safe water access, avoidable waterborne illnesses cause more deaths each year than armed conflicts. In this context, expecting individuals to pay for water they cannot afford fosters an unjust system where . Governments, therefore, have a duty to ensure that this , especially in less affluent or rural areas.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that every individual deserves access to clean water as a basic human right, despite the practical challenges posed. A fair solution would safeguard free access to water for the general public regardless of the financial ramifications.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response presents a clear, consistently maintained position and develops it with relevant, concrete examples such as the California drought and Singapore's pricing model. The strongest aspect is the precise, flexible language throughout; the main limitation is a slight inconsistency between the qualified middle paragraphs and the conclusion's uncompromising call for free access.

IELTS criteria

How each score was decided

Task Response

7.5

The position is clear throughout, both sides of the practical and moral dimensions are developed with relevant supporting examples, and the response addresses the question directly, though the conclusion slightly overstates the case relative to the more nuanced body discussion.

Coherence and Cohesion

7.5

Ideas are organised logically into well-sequenced paragraphs with a clear stance, effective transitions, and a conclusion that follows from the argument, with only minor looseness in linking the tiered-pricing solution to the final recommendation.

Lexical Resource

7.5

Vocabulary is flexible and precise, with natural collocations such as 'engenders serious challenges', 'strained reservoirs', and 'financial ramifications', showing good awareness of style with only occasional less apt phrasing.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5

A wide range of structures is used with flexibility and accuracy, including complex conditionals and relative clauses, and error-free sentences predominate with no mistakes that impede communication.