Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why?
Change Versus Stability in Life
Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why?
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Predicted band5.5Some People are adventurous so they prefer to grab new opportunities, while others like to stay with their past but my inclination is towards the former group. In this essay, I am going to discuss the both ways of life and then give my own opinion on the matter. On the one hand, there are some merits and demerits for people who like to stay with their ancestral attitudes or status. The most vital points which can be cited first regarding this is that they do not want to leave their safe and secure places by any chance. Though like is boring sometimes but they find their happiness in the secure and familiar places. These types of peoples do not want to explore other planets like Mars, Venus or Neptune; this way of living is not helpful for any positive advancement of society. On the other hand, there are some peoples who are adventurous and they try to embrace something new. Firstly they believe that life is like a journey so you need to adapt yourselves to the changes. Otherwise, you will be in a backward period and you have to stay alone in a society. These categorised peoples are helpful for new inventions and also cause of the advancement of society. For instance, our ancient people had left their tomb and embark new way of life as a result, they invented fire and other amenities of ancient life. In my opinion, I enjoy the approaches how life is becoming new with new inventions or experienced new opportunities. I believe, if I get together with my old habits, it will give me tranquillity of life. But after sometimes it makes me bored and inactive. So I am very eager to experience new places and new cultures. By the way, I can feel myself and enjoy my times with the new opportunities.Predicted band5.5"The only thing that doesn't change in life, is the change itself," a famous quote by an anonymous. It presents a notion that life contains dynamic values. The whole universe continues growth till this second. Thus changing is part of intrinsic life's property. Humans are ageing constantly and another possession that every single man must deal with. Physical ought to follow life circle that constantly changing over time. There is no actual steady mode existed in the materialistic world. And the same goes to psychological activities. Man need to grow in order to gain a better stage in life. We need to indulge in an everlasting study to gain maturity. Knowledge which can be sought from informal media is a thing one must always occupy throughout their life. Without the urge to be in continuous development, humans might literally death. Climate changing, to name a few, is the environmental changing which alters the way we live. We are forced to adapt fast to the situation and carried out some anticipation. We need to stop cutting down forest brutally, stop exploiting our natural resources, must take care our sewage carefully, etc.; in order to inhibit the progression from getting worse. In another word, changing is a natural pattern that we need to engage with an open heart. Even dramatic changes in life must be seen with different angles to grasp the value beneath it. When we almost sink down by the lack of fossil fuels, for instance, it had successfully delivered us the birth of bio-fossil that might do wonder for the coming existence of earth itself. When we restrict ourselves from following the trend and get along with the changing, for better or worse, we might beat down by our own reluctance and might wake up knowing that we are isolated in our own autistic world.Predicted band6.5Different people have different lifestyle according to their own preferences and values. Some prefer to have similar life patterns to feel stability and comfort, whereas others look for changes to entertain and enhance their lives. Personally, I enjoy changes and always look forward to new experiences. This is because people learn new things by experiencing changes, and it helps people to adjust to the changing society. To begin with, by experiencing changes, people can learn new knowledge and information. Changes in life can be starting a new job, learning a new skill or transferring to different schools. Even though these changes will be unfamiliar and difficult at first, during the process of adjusting to the change, individuals will be able to upgrade their abilities, pick up a new skill and widen their horizons. For example, last year, I decided to go to the U.S. to study abroad. In the beginning, it was hard getting used to my new school and studying different subjects since the academic curriculum was so different to my home country’s, Korea, system. However, as time went by, I was able to enhance my English speaking skills and learn more about American culture and history. This change of studying abroad definitely helped me to widen my perspectives and explore a different country. Thus, changes can help individuals to broaden their horizons. Furthermore, people must change in order to fit in with today’s society which is changing and developing every day. Nowadays, due to scientific development and discoveries, new technologies and mechanical devices are changing the style of how people live their lives. So people need to change and adapt themselves to the new technologies so that they do not get left behind. To be specific, nobody writes their paper or report by hand these days, they use the computer and type in the words instead so that they can finish their work faster and make it more qualified. If people do not change and use the original method of completing their work by hand, they will not be able to catch up with the quality and speed of people who utilise new methods. Thus, people must change so that they can adapt to the changing society. In conclusion, through changes, people can learn new things and fit in with the developing society. In this regard, people should enjoy having changes in their lives.
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